If you we're a DP, you wouldn't show a shot that was blown up or underexposed. The mistakes you did are similar.
If I was a producer, DP or director, I would think twice before hiring you from this video that you presented to us as a Demo video of your talent, asking how much people would pay you to work after watching this video.
Answer, I wouldn't.
The critics they gave you are not artistic decisions, they are technical errors. We never criticized the subject or the intention of the movement. The rule is generally, who only your best shots as a demo reel, if that's your best shot... I also fail at some shots for various reason (experience is part of these reasons) but of I had to show some shots I did, I would only show the nice ones where there is no basic technical errors.
If you cannot take critics, good luck working with a demanding DP or director, you're up for a ride (hint take the critic, say yes, and correct your mistakes, move on to the next shot)