Tom,
I am not an operator, but I have been in the industry for a while as an assistant. First off- you have a reel. you took the time to gather your footage and compile it- that puts you ahead of some. that is the good part. However- in the opening shot you cut the guy's head off. First shot. in contrast, many of the following shots have too much head room. many of the moves are good and dynamic, but good composition is key. Also, the reel seems to long. better to have a short reel of stronger material than one that shows quantity. Thank you for inviting us to see the reel. it would be cool to see some others posted. I hope that the comments are helpful.