Tom Daigon Posted February 19, 2010 Report Share Posted February 19, 2010 Draft number 2 http://www.vimeo.com/9575713 I moved some things around. took out a bunch. Still left Miranda up front, just because a lot of people that will be seeing this should know who she is. But I imagine that she'll get replaced soon enough. Let me know your thoughts. Thanks again everyone for your comments, long or short. I think it's better because of them. Bryan, I like the pace much better. And the restructuring of the soccer (regardless of its format) works because of how dynamic the shots are. I think you have hit the sweet spot for me with this piece. May the work flow in like wine. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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