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Bryan Fowler

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Hi guys. Let me know your thoughts on this.

It's hard knowing a balance of what shots help, and which distract.

 

I'm not sure about the first shot, it was much longer with a lot of dialogue, but leaving it in didn't seem like a good idea.

 

I also have a long stairs shot from the same movie that might be decent.

but I didn't put it in.

 

Thanks for the input.

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Nice. Get out of the first shot at the 20 second mark. Loose the second shot all together. Loose the second music video all together. Shorten the whole thing by 30 seconds.

 

Like the painting shot and the bridge 180.

 

Music could be a bit stronger but that's just my taste.

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