First Reel ever

[Holger Zechel]

Hi Everybody,

After a while of editing and waiting My First Reel was finally released.

Feedback is welcome.

 

http://www.skycreations.de/_videos/steadi-final-xl.mov

[Holger Zechel]

smaller version

 

http://www.skycreations.de/_videos/steadi-final.mov

[Lars Erik]

Hi Holger,

 

welcome to the forum.

 

I think you've got a decent reel. There are a few issues. The biggest I think is your lack of controlling your horizontal lines. In clip two, this becomes very noticeable. But I'm guessing you know this and are training to avoid it.

 

There are a couple of shots with way too much headroom for my taste, but in time this will become better.

 

I liked the last clips in the forest. Slow moves with not a lot of unwanted movement. Good job. I think you also got good pacing, just clean up those lines in the future. :)

 

PS! In the first clip in the airport, you've got some movement there from your top-stage. Either something was loose or it's a bad camera plate.

 

 

Fly safe!

 

LE

[Jens Piotrowski SOC]

Holger,

 

tatort, tatort und nochmal tatort, mehr vielfalt.

 

du musst lernen die kamera besser zu kontrollieren. man sieht fast alle deine koerperbewegungen, sorry.

 

Jens

[Holger Zechel]

Hi guys, Thank you for the Feedback .... I am working on the mentioned points.

@ Jens ... Ich weiß das die Vielfalt nicht riesig ist. Aller Anfang ist schwer, mit der Zeit wird es hoffentlich mehr werden . ;) Aber aktuell gibt es nicht viel mehr was ich nutzen darf.